on The darkest woods ever by Shardik
31 Jan 2003, 10:08 AM
Shardik, I have a coment for you. BREAK FREE! Your material is interesting, if a little metaphysical, but you base your writing too much on rules, amd so your expression gets lost. Blame your english teachers, they impressed your mind way too much.
on some deleted poem
2 Feb 2003, 4:19 PM
By far, love, this is the best work I have seen from you. Excellent, aalf mabrook, you really have broken throught with this and it is especially refreshing to see the lack of rhyme. And youre imagery is incredible, truly.