Re: The darkest woods ever by Shardik |
31-Jan-03/10:08 AM |
Shardik, I have a coment for you. BREAK FREE! Your material is interesting, if a little metaphysical, but you base your writing too much on rules, amd so your expression gets lost. Blame your english teachers, they impressed your mind way too much.
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regarding some deleted poem... |
2-Feb-03/4:19 PM |
By far, love, this is the best work I have seen from you. Excellent, aalf mabrook, you really have broken throught with this and it is especially refreshing to see the lack of rhyme. And youre imagery is incredible, truly.
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Re: Snow Day by Standby |
20-Mar-04/3:33 PM |
Are you sure you didn't see yourself, someone should fuck your shit up for writing this.
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Re: Snow Day by Standby |
20-Mar-04/3:33 PM |
Are you sure you didn't see yourself, someone should fuck your shit up for writing this.
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Re: Snow Day by Standby |
20-Mar-04/3:33 PM |
Are you sure you didn't see yourself, someone should fuck your shit up for writing this.
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Re: Snow Day by Standby |
20-Mar-04/3:33 PM |
Are you sure you didn't see yourself, someone should fuck your shit up for writing this.
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