regarding some deleted poem...	14-Jul-02/6:23 PM
I had to read it twice to understand the beginning, but i think it s good. Keep up the writing you got potential :P.. good luck and i will talk to ya lata
Re: lurcher for lunch - for James Kelman by roy rocket	14-Jul-02/6:25 PM
try to stay away from using one word so much.. it makes it quite boring that way..
Re: lurcher for lunch - for James Kelman by roy rocket	14-Jul-02/6:25 PM
try to stay away from using one word so much.. it makes it quite boring that way..
regarding some deleted poem...	14-Jul-02/6:27 PM
pretty cool.. dont know if the question marks were intentional, but thats ok.. very good overall
regarding some deleted poem...	14-Jul-02/6:27 PM
pretty cool.. dont know if the question marks were intentional, but thats ok.. very good overall
regarding some deleted poem...	18-Jul-02/8:00 PM
me things me likes *agrees with self* yup me likes
Re: Deadly Rape by HolyKnightOfFaith	24-Jul-02/5:45 PM
there are two people who have this poem.. or r u just two people?