poemranker ::20 most recent comments by robs_remains

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on some deleted poem 20 Dec 2002, 8:29 AM
Very good imagery, a powerful poem,
I don't like "cerulean" it sounds a bit hackneyed,
and "good to the last drop" doesn't seem to fit, but I like it a lot.
on Comfort Food by jessicazee 20 Dec 2002, 8:52 AM
an interesting poem, the mixture of the two sets of
imagery is repellant, brings to mind eating disorders, perhaps that was the intention of the poet, no matter a poem takes on a life of its own once it is born. Smooth blending of imagery, I don't know what to make of the, hmm, old world nature of the foods mentioned...