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Re: InCumBent by slipping 8-Dec-02/8:05 AM
Ouch! I just woke-up, and this poem has cast a gloom over my morning. I'll be thinking about this all day.
Re: going by slipping 8-Dec-02/8:16 AM
Very good.
regarding some deleted poem... 9-Dec-02/1:02 PM
Out here it's every wed. I wake up to the sound of leaf blowers and edgers. I can't remember the last time I did yard work, but I am a starving college student. There are armed guards at the grocery stores.
Re: Walter Cronkite by UnityMitford 9-Dec-02/1:08 PM
Err, excuse me I'm kinda green here, what does this mean? Sorry for being stupid.
regarding some deleted poem... 9-Dec-02/1:45 PM
You are by far one of the best poets here. How could anyone give this a 0 let alone three of them? Wow, that really impresses me. Here's a 10 to even things out.
regarding some deleted poem... 9-Dec-02/2:01 PM
I'm dumb-founded. This took me a long time to read. I guess I should start with something smaller and work my way up. I'll come back again and vote. I need an aspirin.
regarding some deleted poem... 9-Dec-02/2:06 PM
The word traiterous seems out of place. You write from the heart.
regarding some deleted poem... 9-Dec-02/2:11 PM
More old-fashioned than the other poems. I'm a great fan of Lewis Carroll, and Alice. Another 0, unbelievable.
regarding some deleted poem... 9-Dec-02/2:17 PM
This is my favorite poem here, so far. It makes me laugh but it is also very honest.
Re: Of the opposition. Zipcode graffitti by Bachus 10-Dec-02/8:58 AM
e.e. cummings meets the Reverend Jesse, ahhh I forgot his last name.
regarding some deleted poem... 10-Dec-02/9:05 AM
Errr... I feel all dirty now. I don't have a car, around here there is now place to park anyway and every other day they clean the streets and everyone gets a $40.00 ticket. My room-mate had to park his car about 8 blocks away from the building once and when he woke up he couldn't remember where his car was. It tooks us 3 hours to find it. Yesterday I saw a bumper sticker that said 'Osama Bin Laden loves your SUV'.
Re: The yellow rose of California by INTRANSIT 10-Dec-02/9:22 AM
I like your poem.
regarding some deleted poem... 10-Dec-02/9:38 AM
Sorry about your mom. I'm not looking forward to oncology next year. I hate cancer, terrible horrible smelly cancer. Are you and god'swife married? "Why would they be talking to each other on a website you dink", he asked himself. I noticed your personal webpage and just thought that sounds like something a husband would say. Ex-husband? No... impossible. You write fantastic poetry. It's very meaningful, yet simple. I need simple. Are you the resident grouch? Your poetry seem to be in conflict with your comments.


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