on some deleted poem
8 Nov 2002, 8:06 PM
What is this site? I haven't come across an actual poem yet. Enough corny adjectives. Use images. This is all received language. I'm sorry to vent on you...this goes for almost everyone on this site. It's sickening.
on Cancer Haikus by poetandknowit
12 Nov 2002, 10:27 PM
Cancer is something no poet should really try to tackle...no matter how much experience they have with the disease. It's a recipe for disaster. If you know nothing baout cancer, then what is the point? If you know everything about cancer then you're way too closely related to the content. I was somewhat interested in the first stanza until I remebered the title and realized what it was about. Make it vaguely about love or sex like everything else.
on Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit
12 Nov 2002, 10:29 PM
You obviously are not a poet. Wrapped in endless laughter.