Re: a comment on Haiku by heart |
10-Aug-03/10:46 PM |
Yep. Thanks for the feedback.
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Re: a comment on Haiku by heart |
10-Aug-03/10:45 PM |
No, the poem isn't a Haiku (the style is listed as Other). The poem's title is Haiku, but that's a reference to the subject of the poem; I didn't mean it to literally describe the style. If you count syllables, you might notice a relation to Haiku of sorts, but since it's nearly iambic, the syllable counts had to be even numbers.
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Re: a comment on Impervious by heart |
18-Oct-02/8:21 PM |
One of those long, stressful workdays had come to a close. I was drained, and the late summer afternoon was doing its best to coax me back to peacefulness on the drive home.
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Re: Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof |
14-Oct-02/9:07 PM |
Of all the poems I read here last week, this one left the strongest impression. Of poetry, I am not a worthy judge. But this "reads pretty", and spoke to me all week. Thank you for the thoughts to ponder.
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