poemranker ::20 most recent comments by heart and replies

Comments byheart, the 20 most recent, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on Haiku by heart 10 Aug 2003, 10:46 PM
Yep. Thanks for the feedback.
replying on Haiku by heart 10 Aug 2003, 10:45 PM
No, the poem isn't a Haiku (the style is listed as Other). The poem's title is Haiku, but that's a reference to the subject of the poem; I didn't mean it to literally describe the style. If you count syllables, you might notice a relation to Haiku of sorts, but since it's nearly iambic, the syllable counts had to be even numbers.
replying on Impervious by heart 18 Oct 2002, 8:21 PM
One of those long, stressful workdays had come to a close. I was drained, and the late summer afternoon was doing its best to coax me back to peacefulness on the drive home.
on Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof 14 Oct 2002, 9:07 PM
Of all the poems I read here last week, this one left the strongest impression. Of poetry, I am not a worthy judge. But this "reads pretty", and spoke to me all week. Thank you for the thoughts to ponder.