Re: Replenished by outdoorzylady	14-Aug-06/2:11 PM
I'm a fussy arse, me. This is good, but the exclaimation marks are superfluous I think, and it would be much more beautiful and understated without them. Sorry.
Re: Ouija by creepshow	14-Aug-06/2:14 PM
If it wasn't so wordy, it could be better. I'm not saying I don't like wordy stuff; I'm a bit of a sesquipedelian myself, but the more obscure words and tangled phrases seem unnecessary and draw it dangerously close to pretention, and pretentious is a hard look to pull off well.
Re: my goat by joey	14-Aug-06/2:15 PM
This is simply not true. Goats can be milked and the milk can be made into tasty cheeses. Starts off good, gets silly (bad silly) very quickly.