on tomorrow is another day by hendrimike
5 Mar 2006, 8:52 AM
It was really good. Nice job.
on Pelted with stones on the common by Bobjim
5 Mar 2006, 6:23 PM
I think it's a really good poem. I didn't really like the line 'I'd rather be eaten by sharks.' I don't know, that line just didn't really flow to me. But it was a great poem over all.