Re: Third person. by darby pyn	23-Jun-05/3:11 AM
My first, immediate response is three words: What the fuck. There's obviously something behind your forehead, pushing hard to be heard, but it isn't coming out clearly yet--misused words make static: "stigmata" is, for instance, a mystical "miracle" involving having ones hands and possibly side "bleed" with wounds like those traditionally suffered by Jesus on the cross appearing on an individual's body--often during a trance. St. Theresa was one individual rather more afflicted than otherwise by this "miracle." And... if you're suffering from fermentation, some coffee might do you good. I really feel some significance building up beneath the haze, there, man. Let clarity and lucidity rule where they fit--don't be afraid to edit.
Re: Up Close at a Distance by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk	23-Jun-05/3:12 AM
I feel uncomfortably voyeuristic here, but I guess at least you've achieved your purpose. That's a good thing.