Poemranker [20 most recent comments by raiyna and replies]

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replying on Contemplation by raiyna 20 Jun 2005, 7:58 AM

Thank you for all your comments, I will work more on my poetry and try not to repeat the same errors I've made in this one.

replying on Contemplation by raiyna 19 Jun 2005, 1:19 PM

It's fine to criticize, but at least give me some feedback. What suggestions do you have so I may improve?