Re: a comment on Another Tragic Love Poem by greym0on |
1-Nov-02/6:52 PM |
I can't do short poems well. Maybe it's because I don't say much in reality I have to continually blab when I write.
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Re: a comment on Another Tragic Love Poem by greym0on |
1-Nov-02/6:51 PM |
Don't know that one - how about this though?
Dear ones!
You play love on a violin.
The crude play love on a drum.
But unlike me, you can???t turn yourselves inside out
and entirely lips become.
This is my favorite poem of all time.
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Re: a comment on Another Tragic Love Poem by greym0on |
1-Nov-02/6:39 PM |
Ever heard of breaking your own heart? It's kind of funny actually... This poem has given me the most wonderful comments in such a short span of time. Makes me think I should don my black, listen to the Cure, smoke my menthol cigarettes and become stereotypical **sighhhhh** sadness all over again.
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Re: a comment on Another Tragic Love Poem by greym0on |
1-Nov-02/6:35 PM |
Thanks. Actually, I got the idea to write this from a bit of criticizm I got on a prior poem. golden que-tip?
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Re: Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit |
26-Sep-02/7:54 PM |
This is what I wanted to hear, feel and see tonight.
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