replying on Another Tragic Love Poem by greym0on
1 Nov 2002, 6:52 PM
I can't do short poems well. Maybe it's because I don't say much in reality I have to continually blab when I write.
replying on Another Tragic Love Poem by greym0on
1 Nov 2002, 6:51 PM
Don't know that one - how about this though?
Dear ones!
You play love on a violin.
The crude play love on a drum.
But unlike me, you can???t turn yourselves inside out
and entirely lips become.
This is my favorite poem of all time.
Dear ones!
You play love on a violin.
The crude play love on a drum.
But unlike me, you can???t turn yourselves inside out
and entirely lips become.
This is my favorite poem of all time.
replying on Another Tragic Love Poem by greym0on
1 Nov 2002, 6:39 PM
Ever heard of breaking your own heart? It's kind of funny actually... This poem has given me the most wonderful comments in such a short span of time. Makes me think I should don my black, listen to the Cure, smoke my menthol cigarettes and become stereotypical **sighhhhh** sadness all over again.
replying on Another Tragic Love Poem by greym0on
1 Nov 2002, 6:35 PM
Thanks. Actually, I got the idea to write this from a bit of criticizm I got on a prior poem. golden que-tip?
on Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit
26 Sep 2002, 7:54 PM
This is what I wanted to hear, feel and see tonight.