| Re: a comment on Another Tragic Love Poem by greym0on | 1-Nov-02/6:52 PM | 
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          | I can't do short poems well. Maybe it's because I don't say much in reality I have to continually blab when I write. |  |  | 
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  | Re: a comment on Another Tragic Love Poem by greym0on | 1-Nov-02/6:51 PM | 
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          | Don't know that one - how about this though? 
 Dear ones!
 You play love on a violin.
 The crude play love on a drum.
 But unlike me, you can???t turn yourselves inside out
 and entirely lips become.
 
 This is my favorite poem of all time.
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  | Re: a comment on Another Tragic Love Poem by greym0on | 1-Nov-02/6:39 PM | 
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          | Ever heard of breaking your own heart? It's kind of funny actually... This poem has given me the most wonderful comments in such a short span of time. Makes me think I should don my black, listen to the Cure, smoke my menthol cigarettes and become stereotypical **sighhhhh** sadness all over again. |  |  | 
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  | Re: a comment on Another Tragic Love Poem by greym0on | 1-Nov-02/6:35 PM | 
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          | Thanks. Actually, I got the idea to write this from a bit of criticizm I got on a prior poem. golden que-tip? |  |  | 
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  | Re: Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit | 26-Sep-02/7:54 PM | 
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          | This is what I wanted to hear, feel and see tonight. |  |  | 
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