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Re: a comment on Life by AmberDawn 2-Feb-05/1:33 PM
Not mean at all, I appreciate an honest person. Do you know anywhere that has a more friendly, helpful cast of users?
Re: First date (for Larry, a lesbian vampire) by Bachus 2-Feb-05/12:01 PM
I was definitely not expecting that at the end, but the poem is great. It left me wishing there was more to it.
Re: Life by AmberDawn 2-Feb-05/11:58 AM
I wrote this poem when I was 15, I submitted it hoping that I would recieve helpful criticism. The spelling errors are due to my putting the poem in while at work, therefore on a time restriction. Any comments that will actually help would be appreciated. Otherwise, thanks for nothing.


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