poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Zalev and replies

Comments byZalev, the 20 most recent, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on The Snowcone Man by Zalev 4 Jan 2005, 9:01 AM
Thank you for your comments and suggestions.

"Death took the snowconeman, and my smile." -
or "Death took the snowconeman and he took my smile." - something like that?

I don't know... The character that took my smile was my dad, as opposed to "Death" ... or is it the same thing. lol
I would need a few more suggestions, but you bring up a good point.