Re: a comment on Dark Everlasting by Sean Allen	8-Nov-04/9:47 PM
I'm not entirely sure I understand your point about the "last line of the second verse." When I wrote this poem, I was not making any connection to suicide at all, but take what you will.
Re: a comment on Mind's Eye by Sean Allen	8-Nov-04/5:34 PM
actually, not all villanelles are in iambic pentameter. I did however want to write it in pentameter, in order to give it a bit more rhythm.