Re: Untitled by Imago	25-Oct-04/10:42 AM
I think I should lose the (in it) of line 2. Seems unnecessary.
Re: Jesus in a leisure suit by Imago	25-Oct-04/7:13 PM
Or maybe he was auditioning for the Sopranos.
Re: Withering Rose by Imago	25-Oct-04/7:31 PM
You make my head hurt. Home that beauty made means simply a place where beauty appears like on the face of a baby or in a flower garden.The last line of stanza 2 is a lead in to the first line of stanza 3. I somewhat agree with you on stanza 4 but the trick is to show the argument between what fondly was and what bitterly is. I'm not arguing with you though. Just thought I'd explain myself. Your critique is very useful. Thank you