regarding some deleted poem...	18-Sep-04/3:56 AM
Very cool lyrics, luv to hear the song...ahhh, the good old days!
regarding some deleted poem...	18-Sep-04/4:00 AM
Don't be put off by my meagre vote. Lyrics can be hard to judge when not backed by music.
regarding some deleted poem...	18-Sep-04/4:13 AM
You and I have something in common - we write as we experience and feel things. I understand completely what you mean in your poem, but it kinda rambles a little. Understandably, it's hard to sum up an experience that leaves one feeling lost, but perhaps you could shorten the length of the poem by altering the layout. Does that make any sense?
Re: A Kiss Beneath The Blossom Tree by Caducus	18-Sep-04/4:24 AM
Your Mum and Dad would be proud...
regarding some deleted poem...	18-Sep-04/4:40 AM
The more I read over this poem, the more my emotions are stirred and I'm reminded of a lost love. Your writing is heartfelt and very real - loved it.
Re: Friends by Sirens_Voice	19-Sep-04/3:37 AM
I really liked this poem, especially the lines, "We made jokes and we stole glances. Wished we were each others heart enchantment."
regarding some deleted poem...	19-Sep-04/3:42 AM
The poem held my attention until the last four lines. It kinda loses it's momentum. However, I think it's pretty good.