Re: a comment on C. Morgenstern: Gentle Songs by yonderland |
17-Sep-04/1:06 AM |
Like that version, too. Much different, I think mine is more coloured. Maybe because I did it for a certain person, rather than for accuracy's sake... :)
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Re: a comment on C. Morgenstern: Gentle Songs by yonderland |
16-Sep-04/1:24 PM |
Yes, I was so busy with the rhymes that I dropped the syntax! ;-) As for the "silent gear," I think it is more appropriate than trying to be direct; the "ether" thing didn't seem to work for me when I tried out the alternatives.
Thanks for the hints, I'll amend the translation as more comments come in. Suggestions are welcome. Best regards, Ralf
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Re: a comment on C. Morgenstern: The Surf by yonderland |
16-Sep-04/11:04 AM |
Thanks - Took me some time to get the measure & pace right. Morgenstern is tricky, but beautiful. Hope it comes across in English.
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