regarding some deleted poem...	21-Aug-02/3:40 AM
Not a very original title.
regarding some deleted poem...	21-Aug-02/3:49 AM
Who is this poem directed at? I have a lot of respect for poems which are ambiguous or vague or obscure but this poem goes a bit too far. However l really like your structure, it creates an "in your mind" perspective.
Re: Northern Ireland by longships	21-Aug-02/3:55 AM
I really like this poem. You portray the situation brilliantly and also the frustration at not being able to conceive such inhumanity. See "The Curse". It is along the same lines, sort of!
Re: A Nightmare by Dreamer	21-Aug-02/11:23 AM
Do you find murder melodramatic? The poem is not really good but its not bloody daisies or sunsets. I mean my God, if anything my poem does not at all portray the reality of the amount of PAIN and SUFFERING.