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Me and the Darkness (Free verse) by aurora

I sit here in the darkness And watch life fade away My soul aches And soon breaks away. I feel like i'm in the underworld Deep, deep, down I'm alone except for the souls Of those who are gone. I sit here in the darkness And know nothing is right No matter how hard we fight Nothing will ever be right. I know my life will fade away One sad and mournful day Yes, on that mournful day My life truly has faded away. Into the darkness i will go Never to return, always alone.

Tarquin De La Bog 19-Aug-02/6:44 PM
Depressing. 7. Keep taking those tablets; whatever, you do, don't forget. This is miserable stuff. If you were trying to be bleak and dark, congratulations. Not the thing to read if one needs cheering up.




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