<~>28 Apr 2004

mistake #1:

title and opening line repeat. aaaargh!!!

suggested title: 'frisson, unfrozen'

why 'ice season'? has it really been an entire season? or just a hastily-made peace that's grown into a rift?

'will we have to get'--dude, economize! save the breath for when you need it! 'must we' will suffice to thaw this ice!!

the rest of it melts off my tongue, deliciously. now, if you would only ind a way to ease me in--instead of making me fell like you're cranking that pontiac, hoping it will turn over!

bueno.