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It's A Long Way From Heaven (Free verse) by Blindpoetry

I promise to play That green checkered game If you promise to unleash The unspoken words from your heart I like to watch you like a bird With binoculars in one hand The other looking at your... ...beautiful collaboration of family ties I see a reason to live -To survive you In a game of colorful aspects Colliding against my will of misfortune I like to watch you like a bird With a glove on one hand The other petting your... ...Beautiful collaboration of family genes I hit the ceiling fan And my heart ripped open you promised to let me go you promised to show me how to do so I like to watch you like a bird With a gun in one hand The other aiming like your knife That stabbed my ugly collaboration of mixed family viruses...

zodiac 27-Apr-04/5:35 PM
"Colliding against my will of misfortune" is the main bad part. The rest is okay.




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