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Love, Fair (Free verse) by MacFrantic

A stifled beauty rests Catoring sunless isolation A mere Capulet in time Pulsing Radiating A statue of apprehension So long awaiting day

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 27-Apr-04/12:37 PM
Consider the following:

1. "A statue of his"
2. "The Statue of Liberty"
3. "The statues of ancient Greece"
4. "A statue of monumental proportions"

None of those fit with your closed-minded, male chauvinistic definition of "a statue of X" as "a statue in the shape of X". Why don't you get a life buddy!!1




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