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Herman
(
Free verse
) by
richa
Like the fern burnt by frost planted in north's shade is the hermit. A strange alphabet of runes and figures played out has left him left out. But we feel no sadness, we are bees at a honeypot; he has no sweet tooth.
richa
27-Apr-04/8:53 AM
The comment I make in my poems tends to be the flaws in the logic of the voices. i.e. why the hermit is outcast: 'he has no sweet tooth'.
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