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evolution 9 (Free verse) by wilco

up from the water across the ancient sand slow mutation at the genetic level from mammal to snake and back again straining to find a place in the universe lacking the skills necessary for survival synapses firing and gaining solid form coursing in veins not meant for living ghost stories not withstanding it's written in the stones you don't believe

hypatia 25-Apr-04/6:13 PM
How is it you have a bunch of "old votes" and no old comments? Anyway, I'm not rabid, but do like this. I didn't think snakes came from mamals though. Also, I think all the species had or have skills necessary for survival because they survived, at least for a while - picky, picky. Also the last line throws me. Who didn't believe?




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