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sexy (Free verse) by elizabethann

he told me to dye my hair blonde and dress really sexy maybe i'll just shave my head and wear men's clothing sexy isn't my thing but i am beautiful with my scarred arms and not-so-perfect breasts and when i look in the mirror i can smile with my chubby cheeks and thick thighs. sexy just isn't my thing.

validus_vox 24-Apr-04/3:02 PM
i really like this one. solid topic and powerful portrayal of your feelings. once again, powerful structure to set the rhythm and speed of the poem...keep it up...peace


mike




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