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8 or 9 (Free verse) by tadpole

Lime lily blossoms One buttercup Puttin rocks in my pocket Skippin like a rock Swingin so high Coming back down Cranberry Crayons Slurpees and slides That cool breeze on the sweat of a hot day You know my name Runnin amok Feet in the mud Good candy money Fireworks, popsicles Can I please?! Homemade coloring pages mint leaf tea Only costs a quarter, a nickle, or one dime please

tadpole 23-Apr-04/2:25 PM
Hey thanks, yeah I just read it again and the rocks twice in a row is kinda too much and one less coin wouldn't hurt for sure either.




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