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Looking down (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

Invisible panther paws trepidate on taut capillary threads spanning cloisonne tiled chasms that crack, break, heave inviting black cats to fall to suggestion in burning oranges, and join in the ashing of others

capachijim 22-Apr-04/4:37 PM
I don't exactly get the disjunction, maybe it should be a Concrete poem. Otherwise, not bad -8-




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