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reflection (Free verse) by xunitedx

we listen to preachers, presidents, and teachers hoping they tell us the meaning we hide from strange creatures under the bleachers just to live longer while dreaming we wander through valleys, back streets, and alleys searching for what is the truth we attend ballys, live concerts, and rallies just to find innocence left us in youth

zodiac 20-Apr-04/5:14 PM
- "...we row in Norse galleys, see concerts and rallies"
- "...we have big finales at concerts and rallies"
- "...we sometimes have rallies at Lou's or Pasquale's"
- "...the keynote speaker at our rally's Dick Vitale"
- "...everyone shilly-shallies at the aforementioned rallies"
Or you could just capitalize Bally's, use a different word than "attend", and tell everyone who doesn't get it to fuck off.




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