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innocent voyeur (Free verse) by nentwined

I like to watch people interact and make the faces no one sees and try to guess what information's passed and what the interactions mean-- what it is to be this human thing.

ggawrysi 20-Apr-04/1:59 AM
i don't think that "passed" should have its own line... it's not an action word like "interact." otherwise i like it, last line and all




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