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reflection (Free verse) by xunitedx

we listen to preachers, presidents, and teachers hoping they tell us the meaning we hide from strange creatures under the bleachers just to live longer while dreaming we wander through valleys, back streets, and alleys searching for what is the truth we attend ballys, live concerts, and rallies just to find innocence left us in youth

xunitedx 19-Apr-04/10:32 PM
no, i meant ballys. it's a chain of gyms. everything before the last line is what we do everyday. the last line is meant to be the only thing we do find easily is our loss of innocence.




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