Replying to a comment on:
innocent voyeur
(
Free verse
) by
nentwined
I like to watch people interact and make the faces no one sees and try to guess what information's passed and what the interactions mean-- what it is to be this human thing.
Shuushin
19-Apr-04/5:46 PM
I like the poem[e] quite well up to that last line - it sounds like you are trying to avoid a question via syntax.
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