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Loneliness (Haiku) by Cha no Onna

Skytears bleed from the Flowers and jeweled fishnet Beyond prison glass

nentwined 13-Apr-02/12:57 AM
I think this has too many different images glommed into one for me, too much going on. rain == sky tears == sky is crying... tears are bleeding... so rain is rolling off the flowers... jeweled fishnet? a spider's web? outside the window. I think with all the extras tossed in, the meaning is less powerful.




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