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The Flame (Free verse) by Fire_is_cool

The fire consumes me, It is all around, I cry for help, But no one hears, So slowly I die, In pain, And alone, The Flame.

sarah 18-Apr-04/9:10 PM
sorry - didn't like it. need to elaborate or something i think. diggin the concept but it didn't pack enough punch (in my very humble opinion).

just being real. hope not to offend you know...




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