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The Flame
(
Free verse
) by
Fire_is_cool
The fire consumes me, It is all around, I cry for help, But no one hears, So slowly I die, In pain, And alone, The Flame.
sarah
18-Apr-04/9:10 PM
sorry - didn't like it. need to elaborate or something i think. diggin the concept but it didn't pack enough punch (in my very humble opinion).
just being real. hope not to offend you know...
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