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The Flame (Free verse) by Fire_is_cool

The fire consumes me, It is all around, I cry for help, But no one hears, So slowly I die, In pain, And alone, The Flame.

hypatia 18-Apr-04/8:44 PM
Now maybe you've swung too far into vagueness. That's ok, you seem to get better with each new poem.




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