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Dear Ms. Sexton (Lyric) by <{Baba^Yaga}>

It's Summer time at the funeral You're so divine supernatural I see you there but you don't see me I'll keep on hoping we were meant to be But, we went crash, boom, bam I thought you knew we went crash, boom, bam I thought you knew how to love Someone like me It's Autumn now at the carnival I follow you there instinctual That lemonade sure stang your lips As I stare, at your growing hips But, we went crash, boom, bam I thought you knew we went crash, boom, bam I thought you knew how to love A fool like me It's winter-time at the festival Ice sculptured rows of chilled denial You're skating on the pond, with your new Bo You're so in love that I turn and go I go crash, boom, bam I thought you knew I went crash, boom, bam I thought you knew I see through Your transperacy It's Spring at last in the hospital I paint all day 'habitual' I'm better now, and so high above The Doctors cut out all our love It went crash, boom, bam I thought you knew It went crash, boom, bam I wish you knew how to love Border-line.. Serenity......

Bachus 18-Aug-02/7:33 AM
that mother fucking son off a bitch earth fuck.fuck.you spineless fuck i demand you show the comment i just posted in response to your big fucking lecture. i spent the last t20 minutes writing that and if you dont show these good people my reply i will fucking go out of my weay to make sure your cowardly ass, is known as a fucking legless cunt! MOTHERFUCKER1DON'T EVER FUCKING USE MY WORDS AGAINST ME LIKE THAT AND THEN ZAP MY REPLY YOU FUCKINGT PIECE OF FUCKING TALENTLESS SPECULATION...my reply was beatiful and said alot about certain things, but no you can't have any real competition can you, just put your fucking two cents out there to taunt and then when i reply you fucking erase my comment. who in the fuck do you think you are. i don't give a fuck if yoiu're nentwined dude, i spent the better part of a half an hour writing that, just so you could erase it and make me look like an asshole and an irresponsible father. YOU BETTER HOPE I DON'T FIND OUT WHO YOU ARE FUCKER, cuz i will be glad to invest in paying you a visit you fucking spineless piece of shit. i fucking opened up and appologiuzed to you, and this is what i get.you asshole are n ot an earthwalker you are fucking anti everything that's beautiful..i can not believed you fucking did that.what a fucking crock..if i see you dude..EVER!i will gladly go to jail for the time i spend choking you blind got that. don't you fucking ever talk shit about my family, or my friendsn




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