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The Smarts aint Stupids (Sonnet) by Shardik

The problem with Mormons is simple. I'm sure you all will agree. The milk from their cows must be ample. Why should a woman see? To mix cowboys, and indians, with Jesus? Is completely out to lunch. I heard when Augustine sneezes, a neurosis flys out in a bunch. And all of this time we were worried, the devil would be in her snatch. Her millionaire Daddy scurried. Disguising his church's trick latch. Patty Hearst was right. To string cut Daddy's kite.

Sasha 14-Apr-04/7:32 PM
This is not iambic pentameter, rather amateurish in its construction, and, above all, makes no sense.




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