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sky (Other) by youngweirdo

I used to sit and wach the sky,as if it was like family,but then one day the rain came down,and filled the sky with envy, I quickly dashed and ran inside,and wached the sky break down,each tiny raindrop is like a piece of sky, Falling, Falling Further And Further Down.

<{Baba^Yaga}> 18-Aug-02/5:34 AM
I didn't know this was an arts and crafts site also. your rain drops? are incredibly droppish? and your writing is....easy to "get". I guess. But poignant none the less. I suppose?




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