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sky (Other) by youngweirdo

I used to sit and wach the sky,as if it was like family,but then one day the rain came down,and filled the sky with envy, I quickly dashed and ran inside,and wached the sky break down,each tiny raindrop is like a piece of sky, Falling, Falling Further And Further Down.

pitchblackdisaster 18-Aug-02/5:25 AM
what the fuck?
i swear man your poems are fucked up.
what sort of shit is goin on in that head of yours mann?
oh and what the hell happened to the first I? is it meant to be there or what?




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