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being human (Other) by ggawrysi

humans fail because humans fear. without fear there is no cheating there are no traitors wars dissappear. humans fail because humans are jealous. without jealousy there is no divorce there are no scandals abortions dissappear. humans believe that they are smartest for New York City the atomic bomb and the Internet. the dolphins believe that they are smartest for all the same reasons. humans fail because to have free will is to be imperfect.

ggawrysi 14-Apr-04/10:46 AM
i honestly didn't even think of that, but when i was trying to think of an animal to compare to humans dolphins just popped in. i guess it was in the back of my mind. ever hum a tune and think that you've created something original, only to go home and see a commercial with the same tune? same idea.




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