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richa
The omens gather like clouds: A hefty wood pigeon lands on a maple, upsets the grin of a wet leaf, rain falls on my head-- she is beautiful the butterfly claps, earth puts forth its crooked mirror.
Caducus
14-Apr-04/5:51 AM
Agree with horus, the 1st stanza is quite expuisite in the way it is written. You are a fine talent richard.
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