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This guy (Free verse) by Jai

Your so cute your so nice your so polite your just to good to be true your taken

ggawrysi 12-Apr-04/12:01 PM
a rather boring poem with a generic point... not to mention that it's "you're," not "your." there's nothing wrong with a short, cute poem; just give it more distinction and more impact.




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