babbit1117 Aug 2002

I am not sure what you are getting at with the ** around the title. In addition, the images you create are a bit confusing. If it is misting, how can we see the moon? The sky is dark-- you established that with the title. Has the night came, as in spent its wad? Or, is this just a misuse of language. These are just a few errors that really hurt the poem.