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Plastic Explosive Iraqi-Man (Free verse) by Enkidu

The day after the end of the casteless world A maskless god touched vanity as it lie But despite the pleading grace of anonymity We perished The golden sands of earth burned away to fire Glass borders unveiled a machine-gun eulogy Echoes ringing through the stoney chapels Or tombs A papered cleric invited the moon to pray Line by line space divided time; a statue Ran away wind and bastardized creation Broken

hypatia 6-Apr-04/10:45 AM
Have a 5 just because I don't know what you are talking about or how it relates to the title.




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