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Almost One (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom

The truth is often ugly Hidden behind the mask of distance On the other side of the moon Beyond the waterfall pouring life Life is the illusion, Death the reality The end is only the beginning of possibility The question has already been answered The answer is waiting for the start Rewind, I falling behind The main road goes on but its getting about time That you pull in and goto bed I'll be up for hours still Hoping you change your mind we'll talk Run a little further down the road Or maybe you'll ride all the way Til we reach our destination Beyond the wrecks we were before Standing in line, pulses beating out of time Watching the wonder of the show Screaming in an out of key harmony Ten Thousand souls moving in rhythm as one Two souls breathing together as one Almost One

zodiac 2-Apr-04/11:24 AM
By my rough count, the next time lydia evelyn or CLS responds to an unflattering characterization of her physical appearance or personality with "How did you know?" will be the 50th. We should plan some sort of commemoration. A party, perhaps.




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