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''*Night*'' (Free verse) by youngweirdo

The wind is cold,but the air is hot, A mist seeps down and sweeps people up. The night has came, The moon is clear, The sky is dark beneath the fear. I hear a voice inside my dream, Its saying things which make me scream, They make me tremble, My body and soul. And its all in the night, When the wind is cold.

<~> 17-Aug-02/9:16 AM
twinkle twinkle little "*Night*"/how you fill me with such fright/air is hot but wind is cold/rhymes are obvious, subject, old/writer of "*Night*" please try again/ this time don't consult your friends.




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