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You are a Fool, Dad (Free verse) by AskittlesK

We're only related by blood not by personaility or by love. You've hurt me in the past I see it all now. When I was born you weren't there to hold me. Or to say Happy Birthday. When I was only 1 my life had just begun I was told you neglected me and left me alone all day long. I remember you banging on the windows when I was only 2. no one would let you in. Because you were a fool.

hypatia 28-Mar-04/9:32 AM
You have a good theme here, just cloak it a little more and it becomes interesting.




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