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Wondering (Free verse) by anagram

How far away does one belong? How wide is the gulf between right and wrong? How far does love stretch careless of hate? Could it be tomorrow - turning up late? And where does one go,when the venue's not there? And do we return to our homelands elsewhere? And have we a life yet to be seen? And is tomorrow yesterday,that's ours unforeseen? Or do we perceive a line that's so bent? Or do we believe that we're all heaven sent? Or do we accept that when our time's through? We'll all play the harp,on clouds - out of view. CSN 3/85.

Tarquin De La Bog 16-Aug-02/8:29 PM
This has incensed me. 2. A quite frankly dire effort. Your rhyming is poor and there is nothing in the content of the poem that interests me in the slightest. You should be ashamed.




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