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Poetry in action (Free verse) by Bobjim

There lives near the edge of a town, A girl who I've never seen frown, Her beauty unequalled, There can be no sequel, So, will you go out with me now?

Shuushin 24-Mar-04/10:19 AM
oh! you mean, by saying,

"Limericks have one less syllable in the 3rd and 4th lines."

that they (3rd and 4th) have one less syllable than the 1st, 2nd and 5th lines?

so like

there once was (3)
man from nan (3)
bla bla (2)
bla bla (2)
you could suck (3)

like that?




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