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My reflection (Free verse) by singinkygal

Staring in the water at my reflection below watching it being shatttered by the stones I throw Realizing this is what happens when the people I know Shatter my image with the stones they throw How do they see me past the reflection of their own In their glass houses that they call home

caffrey 22-Mar-04/5:16 PM
good concept, but barely poetry. Too many unneeded words




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