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Poetry in action (Free verse) by Bobjim

There lives near the edge of a town, A girl who I've never seen frown, Her beauty unequalled, There can be no sequel, So, will you go out with me now?

Bobjim 22-Mar-04/8:47 AM
That's scarily similar to the first version. But I decided to actually use this on someone, so I modified it a bit.




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